Hey I'm part of the FeedbackFrenzy Contest and so I'm here to critique your picture (I don't know why I choose the second picture of you, too, they got someting I really like ^^)
So I'll start with the first impression. When I saw this picture my first thought was "wonderful", because I really love sunset pictures and the bird makes it more interesting in my opinion.
And now I'll say something to the things you want to hear. So the quality: Theres nothing to say bad about it in this picture. Its sharp and you can see every wave and the sun behind the clouds.
So go on with the creativity. I don't know if you edit it, but when you did it good, because I looks really natural. I guess this picture wasn't planed by you, so I can't say to much to the creativity. But even if it was luck you did a good job because its perfect in his frames and the focus on the right side.
And now going in with the technique. Theres something I can critique because its sadly that the hoizont is aslope. I know you can't do it in this moment perfect but maybe by editing later. This is the only thing I would improve.
In the end its a great shot with stunning colors and a lot of details
Hello, I'm here to leave you a #FeedbackFrenzy critique! I really love the contrast between the sky and the water here - there's a good strong yellow around the sun that blends wonderfully into the orange, leaving a beautiful trail of gold down the centre of the blue, which has wonderful detail in the waves, it looks great XD Meanwhile the bird gives a fantastically clean and well-captured silhouette, nicely in focus and not blurred It is a little bit of a shame that the tip of its wing is cut off at the edge of the photo though - shooting this scene as landscape instead of portrait, with the sun and the bird either in the centre, or in the left third, would have resulted in more space on the right, which I think this photo definitely needs. The horizon also isn't quite straight, which can be a very distracting element in an otherwise great photo. Those are the only couple of points that I personally would have done a little differently though In general I really like this photo, I love sunsets and you certainly caught this one at a brilliant moment with the bird there
Hello, I'm here to write a critique as part of contest!
I love the colours in this picture, it makes a nice and serene sunset. Also you catched really well the bird (maybe an owl?). The shadowed silhoutte changes the framework of the entire picture. Also the reflection of the sun in the water it's magical!
I do have however some critiques. For horizont pictures it's better to use the 3 rule. For example 1/3 part of water and 2/3 the sky, or the other way around. Luckily in this picture the birds shadow chases away the feeling of dis-proportionality. Also the horizont line isn't exactly straight, it misses a few degrees in my opinion. A small detail you can rectify anytime.
Keep up the good work, and have a Merry Christmas!
It looks like a perfectly amazing photo You've done very well in this picture The bird flying over the ocean and the orange sun is absolutely beautiful You're very lucky to have the chance to take such a gorgeous photo ^^. I would like to be there right know under the hot sun of florida and see the scene that you actually took in picture