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:star:Entered into the FeedbackFrenzy Critique Compitition.

I would like this to be critiques on quality, Technique, and creativity.
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:iconmandarinchenx:
Hey I'm part of the FeedbackFrenzy Contest and so I'm here to critique your picture (I don't know why I choose the second picture of you, too, they got someting I really like ^^)

So I'll start with the first impression. When I saw this picture my first thought was "wonderful", because I really love sunset pictures and the bird makes it more interesting in my opinion.

And now I'll say something to the things you want to hear. So the quality: Theres nothing to say bad about it in this picture. Its sharp and you can see every wave and the sun behind the clouds.

So go on with the creativity. I don't know if you edit it, but when you did it good, because I looks really natural.
I guess this picture wasn't planed by you, so I can't say to much to the creativity. But even if it was luck you did a good job because its perfect in his frames and the focus on the right side.

And now going in with the technique. Theres something I can critique because its sadly that the hoizont is aslope. I know you can't do it in this moment perfect but maybe by editing later.
This is the only thing I would improve.

In the end its a great shot with stunning colors and a lot of details
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Hello, I'm here to leave you a #FeedbackFrenzy critique! :la:
I really love the contrast between the sky and the water here - there's a good strong yellow around the sun that blends wonderfully into the orange, leaving a beautiful trail of gold down the centre of the blue, which has wonderful detail in the waves, it looks great XD Meanwhile the bird gives a fantastically clean and well-captured silhouette, nicely in focus and not blurred :)
It is a little bit of a shame that the tip of its wing is cut off at the edge of the photo though - shooting this scene as landscape instead of portrait, with the sun and the bird either in the centre, or in the left third, would have resulted in more space on the right, which I think this photo definitely needs. The horizon also isn't quite straight, which can be a very distracting element in an otherwise great photo.
Those are the only couple of points that I personally would have done a little differently though :) In general I really like this photo, I love sunsets and you certainly caught this one at a brilliant moment with the bird there :D
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TheEarthquakeMachine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Beyond quality, tech and creativity this is about destiny, luck, beautiful!!! f*ck technique!!!
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annabre7 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
If it wasn't for the crooked horizon and the fact it was shot in portrait style, it would be peeerrrfect! Beautiful colours
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IridescentCatalyst Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Wow! The timing was great!
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Beautiful shot my friend:) 
Love this shade of orange and the silhouette of the bird:)
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :heart: 
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome my friend!:D
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kAoTiCwOnDeR Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful and perfectly timed. Well done!!! 
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you c:
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kAoTiCwOnDeR Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Your very welcome!!! ^_^
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qwstarplayer Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Photographer
nice shoot :)
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much X3
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AdrianaFilip Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Hello,:wave: I'm here to write a critique as part of :iconfeedbackfrenzy: contest!

I love the colours in this picture, it makes a nice and serene sunset. Also you catched really well the bird (maybe an owl?). The shadowed silhoutte changes the framework of the entire picture. Also the reflection of the sun in the water it's magical!

I do have however some critiques.
For horizont pictures it's better to use the 3 rule. For example 1/3 part of water and 2/3 the sky, or the other way around. Luckily in this picture the birds shadow chases away the feeling of dis-proportionality.
Also the horizont line isn't exactly straight, it misses a few degrees in my opinion. A small detail you can rectify anytime.

Keep up the good work, and have a Merry Christmas! :santa:
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arualcat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Wonderful!
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much! :hug:
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SimplyKristina Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Beautiful and caught my eye will be favoriting
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :blushes:
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SimplyKristina Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Your welcome <3
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh the bird is perfectly placed to make the picture truly interesting.

And you beautifull captured the way the sunshine shines through the clouds
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very much for the kind comment! :glomp:
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
:wave:

a fellow deviant has submitted this deviation to :iconwater-and-nature-art: to make you happy. :iconfingerdanceplz:

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:icongdjobplz: If you want your beautiful deviation to be exposed at :iconwater-and-nature-art: you need to accept the request

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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you, but I didn't see it in the Members Choice section :(
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
you have first to accept the request
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I did but I still don't see it.
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
i see it
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ah! I see it now!! Thank you so much! :heart:
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
You are very welcome!
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Keltar11 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Excellent picture. I wish I got views like that. Thanks for sharing it!
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :D
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Keltar11 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
You deserve it! :D
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MarcusL76 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sooooo beautiful. :)
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much :glomp:
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MarcusL76 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome my friend. :)
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Poetunderground Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What a gorgeous sunset! The light streaks with the orange-cast glow is amazing, capturing the bird in the image adds another fantastic dynamic.
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much!
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BradleyPitt Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Photographer
Sunset very nice, the bird adds a very very nice touch :D
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank You very much!
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BradleyPitt Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Photographer
:D
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Angel-Moonlight Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It looks like a perfectly amazing photo :D You've done very well in this picture :clap: The bird flying over the ocean and the orange sun is absolutely beautiful :) You're very lucky to have the chance to take such a gorgeous photo ^^. I would like to be there right know under the hot sun of florida and see the scene that you actually took in picture :dummy:
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much for the lovely comment! It means a lot to me :D
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Angel-Moonlight Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome ^^
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karl-johnimages Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Photographer
I like
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank You!
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Izzyforreal Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful!!! where was this taken?
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Florida :)
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