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Orange Delight by Blueeyes0001 Orange Delight by Blueeyes0001
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:star:Entered into the FeedbackFrenzy Critique Compitition.

I would like this to be critiques on quality, Technique, and creativity.
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:iconmandarinchenx:
Hey I'm part of the FeedbackFrenzy Contest and so I'm here to critique your picture (I don't know why I choose the second picture of you, too, they got someting I really like ^^)

So I'll start with the first impression. When I saw this picture my first thought was "wonderful", because I really love sunset pictures and the bird makes it more interesting in my opinion.

And now I'll say something to the things you want to hear. So the quality: Theres nothing to say bad about it in this picture. Its sharp and you can see every wave and the sun behind the clouds.

So go on with the creativity. I don't know if you edit it, but when you did it good, because I looks really natural.
I guess this picture wasn't planed by you, so I can't say to much to the creativity. But even if it was luck you did a good job because its perfect in his frames and the focus on the right side.

And now going in with the technique. Theres something I can critique because its sadly that the hoizont is aslope. I know you can't do it in this moment perfect but maybe by editing later.
This is the only thing I would improve.

In the end its a great shot with stunning colors and a lot of details
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Hello, I'm here to leave you a #FeedbackFrenzy critique! :la:
I really love the contrast between the sky and the water here - there's a good strong yellow around the sun that blends wonderfully into the orange, leaving a beautiful trail of gold down the centre of the blue, which has wonderful detail in the waves, it looks great XD Meanwhile the bird gives a fantastically clean and well-captured silhouette, nicely in focus and not blurred :)
It is a little bit of a shame that the tip of its wing is cut off at the edge of the photo though - shooting this scene as landscape instead of portrait, with the sun and the bird either in the centre, or in the left third, would have resulted in more space on the right, which I think this photo definitely needs. The horizon also isn't quite straight, which can be a very distracting element in an otherwise great photo.
Those are the only couple of points that I personally would have done a little differently though :) In general I really like this photo, I love sunsets and you certainly caught this one at a brilliant moment with the bird there :D
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TheEarthquakeMachine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Beyond quality, tech and creativity this is about destiny, luck, beautiful!!! f*ck technique!!!
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annabre7 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
If it wasn't for the crooked horizon and the fact it was shot in portrait style, it would be peeerrrfect! Beautiful colours
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IridescentCatalyst Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Wow! The timing was great!
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Beautiful shot my friend:) 
Love this shade of orange and the silhouette of the bird:)
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :heart: 
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cyimang Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome my friend!:D
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kAoTiCwOnDeR Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful and perfectly timed. Well done!!! 
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you c:
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kAoTiCwOnDeR Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Your very welcome!!! ^_^
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